Nirrvash
Hey, guys.
Thanks so much for the awesome feedback on the last chapter, both the positive one and the one pointing out the flaws. I read it all and it made me all the more curious to see what you have to say about this chapter. I know they say 'Don't blow your own trumpet', but I must say this is a great chapter. I'm very happy with it and you could even say proud of it. Of course, not everyone may see it the same way after reading it. If so you can disabuse me of that notion down in the comments.
Nirrvash
Hey, guys.
Thanks so much for the awesome feedback on the last chapter, both the positive one and the one pointing out the flaws. I read it all and it made me all the more curious to see what you have to say about this chapter. I know they say 'Don't blow your own trumpet', but I must say this is a great chapter. I'm very happy with it and you could even say proud of it. Of course, not everyone may see it the same way after reading it. If so you can disabuse me of that notion down in the comments.
