Chapter 8: Delivery and New Sight
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Chapter 8: Delivery and New Sight
Tala looked from Lyn to Holly. Speaking of mage-sight
Ahh, yes. I left off the four connection points that will activate that portion of your inscribing. I thought it better to not add that on top of everything else. Additionally, we still need to discuss the changes, adding to the wisdom of the delay.
But I should just be able to activate She hesitated, then sighed. You made that a passive enhancement as well, didnt you.
Holly grinned. Of course! Once connected and activated, it will show you any magic source you focus on, but otherwise only bring new, or changing, sources of magic to your awareness. It is really quite genius.
If you do say so yourself, Lyn muttered under her breath just before taking a sip of coffee; Tala heard it perfectly.
Tala grinned, but then turned back to Holly. Why?
Many a Mage has been undone because they didnt know to activate their mage-sight, or because they were overwhelmed by the information provided, as Lyn implied. This gets around that problem.
Tala was unconvinced. So, why doesnt everyone use your method?
Because, without the mental enhancing inscriptions, which we added to you, their mind would pop like an egg thrown at a wall.
Vivid.
Holly shrugged. Accurate.
So, my enhancements will allow for this?
Based on my calculations.
Tala had been about to take another bite, but she paused. Say again?
From everything I can determine, you should be fine.
You could just say, Yes.
That would be a lie. I strive for honesty with my clients.
Tala set her donut aside, cleaned off her hands, and then rubbed her face. How can you not know? She pointed at her own cheek, where she presumed that the spell-lines were waiting activation. They are already on my face, Mistress Holly. How can you not know?
Because no one else has been quite like you, dear. This is all new.
Tala groaned. She did have a moment of reflexive relief that groaning didnt cause any discomfort.
In a strange turn, Lyn patted Tala gently on the back. Based on the brief contact, Tala noticed a ring she hadnt taken note of, before. Through Talas distraction, she still heard Lyns reassurance. Think of it this way, Mistress Tala: Would you prefer someone who takes a risk, all the while assuring you it was perfectly safe, or someone who was perfectly aware of the risks, honest about them, and actively worked to reduce them?
She sighed. Fine. A moments thought brought to mind a memory of Lyns ring, as shed obviously seen it earlier. It was incredibly disconcerting for Tala, remembering something, in vivid detail, that she hadnt noticed before. She twisted, looking at Lyns hand, and confirming the ring was as shed expected. Whats with the ring?
Lyn blinked at her. ItsIts just a ring. Ive had it for years. She frowned. Youve never seen me without it.
Holly was grinning. Shell be noticing things she missed, before. The ring is likely just the first she vocalized.
Tala was staring at the ring, seemingly unable to divert her attention, as her mind showed her a dozen memories of Lyn, all including that ring. How did I
Not notice, dear?
Yeah. It seems so obvious.
Each of us is blind to some things. You just didnt take note of it.
Tala looked at the woman and was suddenly struck by the weariness in her. Hollys posture was good, but not as perfect as when Tala had first met her. Her intricate inscribing was darker beneath her eyes, and there were subtle lines across her features. Mistress Holly? Are you alright?
The older woman blinked at her. YesAhh I see you are actually beginning to use your increased perception.
You look exhausted.
She smiled. Oh, I am. Ive gotten some sleep since we began, but not much. As soon as we discuss your mage-sight and activate it, I plan to sleep for She thought for a moment, then laughed. For as long as I can, probably.
Well, we should get to it, then. Tala took the last two bites of breakfast in a single mouthful and washed it down with the remains of her coffee. Talas eyes swept over Lyn, and she noted that she could now take a better guess at the other womans age. Twenty-five. She has a full five years on me. That was a funny thought; Lyn acted like a peer, but she also acted like she was Talas mother.
Honestly, Tala felt a bit foolish. Any Mage, lacking a master as Lyn clearly did, would have had to finish their time as a mageling, which could take anywhere from three to ten years. The fact that Lyn was still so young, and a full Mage, spoke very well to her abilities.
How will I be perceived? I skipped that whole process She wondered if she would ever learn all that she would have under a master. No going back, now.
Standing, Tala looked down at her two companions. Shall we?
They smiled up at her, and she could easily see their agreement and care in the expressions. I am luckier than I knew.
Holly and Lyn stood almost as one, their smiles still playing across their faces.
Yes. The quicker we get back to my shop, the sooner I can sleep.
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They were back at the front of Hollys warehouse, door open for re-entry, when a mans voice interrupted them, Mistress Tala! Wait a moment. Tala heard a power behind the voice; the volume wasnt great, but the words carried clearly and easily across the distance. The tone and intonation denoted control and ready strength.
She turned and saw Ashin striding across the road, several packages in hand. Noticing things that I havent noticed before isodd. She quirked an eyebrow. Guardsman?
He smiled slightly, his eyes flicking to her face, arms, and bare feet, seeming to take in her new inscribings. Your apothecary was quite distraught when you didnt return to claim your items. He lifted the few small packages slightly, indicating their contents.
Oh! Thank you. She stepped forward quickly to take them from him. Once the packages were in hand, she paused. He didnt leave, or say anything, and her newly prominent senses were screaming at her that he was feeling suddenly awkward. Tala glanced at Lyn. ImIm not certain if anything else is required? Id offer him a fee, for carrying the packages for me, butIm broke.
Ashin reddened. I am right here, Mistress.
Tala turned back to him. Im hardly going to ask you if its appropriate to give you money.
His red features darkened. Are you implying that I would lie? His hand seemed to be drifting towards his sword, but the motion struck her as subconscious. Interesting. He has an unconscious reflex to be ready to defend his honor with violence, but not an immediate drive towards such.
No, of course not. Just that She hesitated. I had been concerned that hed lie That was a bit uncharitable, she supposed. I apologize for the offense. Ive had a taxing few days. Is there anything else I can do for you?
Ashin took a deep breath and seemed to wrangle down his own emotions, bringing his hands forward to clasp in front of his waist.
Thoughts bearing words paled, and any attempt at description was rendered utterly inadequate to convey the overpowering radiance of the womans spell-lines, and the power and intricacies there-in. It was more than that, though. There almost seemed to be power in the air around Holly, which made no sense. She has spell-lines that arent a part of her body?How? Taken as a whole, it was a tapestry of utter mastery, meticulously constructed on a bright yellow canvas.
Talas mind simply couldnt hold, let alone understand, the complexity and depth.
That simple glance caused her consciousness to flicker, and she was left with a hole in her memory and a single-word impression.
CREATE.
Tala could not have stated what quadrant Holly was. Tala wondered if shed ever find out, if the woman didnt choose to share that information.
After the flicker of mental blackness, her perception seemed to return to a normal pace, and she was able to turn her head, scanning her surroundings more fully.
Each item was briefly highlighted, and their marginal magical affinities noted.
Nothing was surprising to her, or even new, as shed always known the inherent connections all things had to various aspects of power. She'd sometimes even seen those, in the past.
After a long minute, during which Holly and Lyn regarded her carefully, if silently, Tala finally smiled. I thinkI think Im adjusting.
Lyn let out what seemed to be a long-held breath. Good. I like this robe. She gestured down at her cream colored, Mages robe. Id hate to have it soiled by exploding heads. After a moments hesitation, she amended. Well, an exploding head.
Holly sighed. As I explained. The bursting would have been entirely internal. The most wed have seen was some bleeding from her eyes.
Tala cleared her throat. SoWere clear?
Holly smiled. We are. We wont do the deeper dimensions of your inscriptions on the rest of your body until you return, and well save the tailored inscriptions on your internal organs for some time after that. She hesitated. Maybe, well do it at the same time. Well have to see. She smiled.
Tala spun her right forefinger in a circle in the air. Yay! I cant wait.
Just then, a form walked into range of her mage-sight, across and behind the closed door. Tala could tell by the lack of strictly patterned, concentrated aura, that they were un-inscribed, but even so, she was able to see traces of power looping through them in flowing circuits. The circuits had an odd look, as if they were spell-lines, but of a different metal and design than any shed yet seen. Is that their circulatory system?
She followed the form as it passed. Initially, it had begun to slowly fade, as her mage-sight determined that shed seen it, but as she maintained her focus, keeping her gaze locked on the movements, it became clear once again.
Huh.
Holly and Lyn were looking at her strangely. Dear? Are you alright?
Tala kept following the person with her sight as they continued on their way. Yes. A person came into range, beyond the wall, and I could see them.
Holly glanced at the door, then back at Tala. Through the wall? Are you sure?
Tala nodded, still not turning. And Im still seeing them, even though they are close to three times as far away, now, as when they first came into sight.
That part makes sense. If you focus on something, no matter the distance, your mage-sight will show the magic of it, but She hesitated. Is it clear? Are you sure your eyes arent tricking you?
Tala quirked a smile. I can count their heartbeats, if you want. She nodded. Im sure.
Focus on me, Im going to go through the door, and I want to know if you can tell what I am doing.
Tala allowed her gaze to leave the target, and it immediately vanished. She glanced towards Holly but made sure not to focus on her. Ummm Id rather not. Youre kind of painful to look at.
Holly blinked. I think I should be insulted.
Talas smile grew. I meant that your magic is incredibly bright. It overwhelmed me for a moment there. Theres also a strange underlying hue to the whole thing. Do you have spell-lines in the air around you? How is that even possible?
Hmmmm Holly scratched the side of her face. You were still adjusting Would you be willing to try again? She did not answer any of Talas questions.
Tala hesitated, then nodded. If Im looking at it, I can ask more pointed questions. I suppose so. She allowed her focus to fall on Holly, and the woman immediately began to glow, her spell-lines becoming easily visible, even through her clothing. The light began to become painful, but something within Tala seemed to shift, and while she could tell the power, as she perceived it, was continuing to grow, it was no longer difficult to take in. Interesting. I can see now. It looks different than before, and it also seems a little hazy? She smiled. Material Creator? Are you doing something to shield your magic?
Thats right, I began my career as a Material Creator. As to the second, thats not your concern right now.
There was too much in that answer to unpack at the moment, so Tala decided to press on with the matter at hand. Are all your spell-lines bent towards the understanding and enacting of inscribings? All those I can see. It sounds like shes masking or altering how she looks to me.
It is my life, dear.
Its more than that. Portions of Hollys magic were devoted to connecting with various knowledge archives. Most inscribers that Tala knew of would use tablets, or other such items, empowered for the purpose; Holly used herself. It was less materially efficient, for that specific task, but Tala would bet her last copper that it saved Holly a great deal over-all in time, metal, and power. I dont understand all the archive functions.
Hollys eyes widened, just slightly, and Tala saw power ripple through the lines around the older womans eyes. Those are on my ribs, dear. You can see them?
Yes. But what is the-
Holly placed her hand over Talas mouth, cutting her off. Holly then cleared her throat. That is not something we should discuss. Maybe when we know each other better Her eyes flicked to Lyn, then to the door. And when we can have time to talk alone.
Lyns eyes narrowed, but she seemed to decide not to say anything.
Hollys hand came away, and Tala shrugged. As you wish. Shed decided not to press. The Core Archives does sound like something without wide access. She found herself grinning. If Holly inscribes administrative Mages, it would not have been difficult for her to give herself those same magics. I wonder how many such secrets she has made use of over the years? There was something more. The fact that shed seen something real, which Holly didnt expect, meant that she wasnt being deceived by what she saw, at least not entirely. Maybe, Holly is just hiding the spell-lines in the air? The underlying yellow hue was also missing, now. Ill figure it out eventually, I suppose.
Holly was watching Tala carefully, but when the younger girl didnt say more, Holly nodded. Very well. It seems that your mage-sight will be even more useful that wed thought, if it can pick up power even through solid objects. You should receive some sort of signal if magic pops up, or changes, outside of your line of sight, but Ive honestly no idea how that will manifest, or if there is some sort of threshold involved.
Tala nodded. I was wondering about that. The schema we discussed seemed to have allowed that. It almost looked like it would take a threshold to open that portion of my sight, but afterwards it would function much the same as that within my normal vision.
Could be. That was my hope, but poor is the fool who counts on hopes and wishes. If that is how you understood it, then thats the most likely way it will function.
Lyn cleared her throat. As wonderful as this is, I think that Tala is due a good night of sleep in a normal bed. She glanced to Tala. Can you apply youriron, at my house? After a moment she added. I would prefer if there werent any cleanup required, when you are done.
Tala nodded. Absolutely. Ive gotten very practiced at keeping the iron contained. The Masters at the academy were quite cross, until I was able to perfect the process. In truth, theyd never approved, but at least theyd stopped slating her for punishment, after shed stopped contaminating random parts of the school.
In that case, we should be off. Lyn turned and gave Holly a half bow. Mistress.
Holly bowed tiredly in return. Mistress. Until next time.
Tala bowed as well and came up smiling. Thank you, Mistress Holly. I suppose I will see you in just over two weeks!
See that you do. Holly winked. Take care, child.
I will.
Without another word, Tala and Lyn departed, heading for Lyns home and a good nights sleep.
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Chapter 8: Delivery and New Sight
Tala looked from Lyn to Holly. Speaking of mage-sight
Ahh, yes. I left off the four connection points that will activate that portion of your inscribing. I thought it better to not add that on top of everything else. Additionally, we still need to discuss the changes, adding to the wisdom of the delay.
But I should just be able to activate She hesitated, then sighed. You made that a passive enhancement as well, didnt you.
Holly grinned. Of course! Once connected and activated, it will show you any magic source you focus on, but otherwise only bring new, or changing, sources of magic to your awareness. It is really quite genius.
If you do say so yourself, Lyn muttered under her breath just before taking a sip of coffee; Tala heard it perfectly.
Tala grinned, but then turned back to Holly. Why?
Many a Mage has been undone because they didnt know to activate their mage-sight, or because they were overwhelmed by the information provided, as Lyn implied. This gets around that problem.
Tala was unconvinced. So, why doesnt everyone use your method?
Because, without the mental enhancing inscriptions, which we added to you, their mind would pop like an egg thrown at a wall.
Vivid.
Holly shrugged. Accurate.
So, my enhancements will allow for this?
Based on my calculations.
Tala had been about to take another bite, but she paused. Say again?
From everything I can determine, you should be fine.
You could just say, Yes.
That would be a lie. I strive for honesty with my clients.
Tala set her donut aside, cleaned off her hands, and then rubbed her face. How can you not know? She pointed at her own cheek, where she presumed that the spell-lines were waiting activation. They are already on my face, Mistress Holly. How can you not know?
Because no one else has been quite like you, dear. This is all new.
Tala groaned. She did have a moment of reflexive relief that groaning didnt cause any discomfort.
In a strange turn, Lyn patted Tala gently on the back. Based on the brief contact, Tala noticed a ring she hadnt taken note of, before. Through Talas distraction, she still heard Lyns reassurance. Think of it this way, Mistress Tala: Would you prefer someone who takes a risk, all the while assuring you it was perfectly safe, or someone who was perfectly aware of the risks, honest about them, and actively worked to reduce them?
She sighed. Fine. A moments thought brought to mind a memory of Lyns ring, as shed obviously seen it earlier. It was incredibly disconcerting for Tala, remembering something, in vivid detail, that she hadnt noticed before. She twisted, looking at Lyns hand, and confirming the ring was as shed expected. Whats with the ring?
Lyn blinked at her. ItsIts just a ring. Ive had it for years. She frowned. Youve never seen me without it.
Holly was grinning. Shell be noticing things she missed, before. The ring is likely just the first she vocalized.
Tala was staring at the ring, seemingly unable to divert her attention, as her mind showed her a dozen memories of Lyn, all including that ring. How did I
Not notice, dear?
Yeah. It seems so obvious.
Each of us is blind to some things. You just didnt take note of it.
Tala looked at the woman and was suddenly struck by the weariness in her. Hollys posture was good, but not as perfect as when Tala had first met her. Her intricate inscribing was darker beneath her eyes, and there were subtle lines across her features. Mistress Holly? Are you alright?
The older woman blinked at her. YesAhh I see you are actually beginning to use your increased perception.
You look exhausted.
She smiled. Oh, I am. Ive gotten some sleep since we began, but not much. As soon as we discuss your mage-sight and activate it, I plan to sleep for She thought for a moment, then laughed. For as long as I can, probably.
Well, we should get to it, then. Tala took the last two bites of breakfast in a single mouthful and washed it down with the remains of her coffee. Talas eyes swept over Lyn, and she noted that she could now take a better guess at the other womans age. Twenty-five. She has a full five years on me. That was a funny thought; Lyn acted like a peer, but she also acted like she was Talas mother.
Honestly, Tala felt a bit foolish. Any Mage, lacking a master as Lyn clearly did, would have had to finish their time as a mageling, which could take anywhere from three to ten years. The fact that Lyn was still so young, and a full Mage, spoke very well to her abilities.
How will I be perceived? I skipped that whole process She wondered if she would ever learn all that she would have under a master. No going back, now.
Standing, Tala looked down at her two companions. Shall we?
They smiled up at her, and she could easily see their agreement and care in the expressions. I am luckier than I knew.
Holly and Lyn stood almost as one, their smiles still playing across their faces.
Yes. The quicker we get back to my shop, the sooner I can sleep.
* * *The original appearance of this chapter can be found at Ñøv€lß1n.
They were back at the front of Hollys warehouse, door open for re-entry, when a mans voice interrupted them, Mistress Tala! Wait a moment. Tala heard a power behind the voice; the volume wasnt great, but the words carried clearly and easily across the distance. The tone and intonation denoted control and ready strength.
She turned and saw Ashin striding across the road, several packages in hand. Noticing things that I havent noticed before isodd. She quirked an eyebrow. Guardsman?
He smiled slightly, his eyes flicking to her face, arms, and bare feet, seeming to take in her new inscribings. Your apothecary was quite distraught when you didnt return to claim your items. He lifted the few small packages slightly, indicating their contents.
Oh! Thank you. She stepped forward quickly to take them from him. Once the packages were in hand, she paused. He didnt leave, or say anything, and her newly prominent senses were screaming at her that he was feeling suddenly awkward. Tala glanced at Lyn. ImIm not certain if anything else is required? Id offer him a fee, for carrying the packages for me, butIm broke.
Ashin reddened. I am right here, Mistress.
Tala turned back to him. Im hardly going to ask you if its appropriate to give you money.
His red features darkened. Are you implying that I would lie? His hand seemed to be drifting towards his sword, but the motion struck her as subconscious. Interesting. He has an unconscious reflex to be ready to defend his honor with violence, but not an immediate drive towards such.
No, of course not. Just that She hesitated. I had been concerned that hed lie That was a bit uncharitable, she supposed. I apologize for the offense. Ive had a taxing few days. Is there anything else I can do for you?
Ashin took a deep breath and seemed to wrangle down his own emotions, bringing his hands forward to clasp in front of his waist.
Thoughts bearing words paled, and any attempt at description was rendered utterly inadequate to convey the overpowering radiance of the womans spell-lines, and the power and intricacies there-in. It was more than that, though. There almost seemed to be power in the air around Holly, which made no sense. She has spell-lines that arent a part of her body?How? Taken as a whole, it was a tapestry of utter mastery, meticulously constructed on a bright yellow canvas.
Talas mind simply couldnt hold, let alone understand, the complexity and depth.
That simple glance caused her consciousness to flicker, and she was left with a hole in her memory and a single-word impression.
CREATE.
Tala could not have stated what quadrant Holly was. Tala wondered if shed ever find out, if the woman didnt choose to share that information.
After the flicker of mental blackness, her perception seemed to return to a normal pace, and she was able to turn her head, scanning her surroundings more fully.
Each item was briefly highlighted, and their marginal magical affinities noted.
Nothing was surprising to her, or even new, as shed always known the inherent connections all things had to various aspects of power. She'd sometimes even seen those, in the past.
After a long minute, during which Holly and Lyn regarded her carefully, if silently, Tala finally smiled. I thinkI think Im adjusting.
Lyn let out what seemed to be a long-held breath. Good. I like this robe. She gestured down at her cream colored, Mages robe. Id hate to have it soiled by exploding heads. After a moments hesitation, she amended. Well, an exploding head.
Holly sighed. As I explained. The bursting would have been entirely internal. The most wed have seen was some bleeding from her eyes.
Tala cleared her throat. SoWere clear?
Holly smiled. We are. We wont do the deeper dimensions of your inscriptions on the rest of your body until you return, and well save the tailored inscriptions on your internal organs for some time after that. She hesitated. Maybe, well do it at the same time. Well have to see. She smiled.
Tala spun her right forefinger in a circle in the air. Yay! I cant wait.
Just then, a form walked into range of her mage-sight, across and behind the closed door. Tala could tell by the lack of strictly patterned, concentrated aura, that they were un-inscribed, but even so, she was able to see traces of power looping through them in flowing circuits. The circuits had an odd look, as if they were spell-lines, but of a different metal and design than any shed yet seen. Is that their circulatory system?
She followed the form as it passed. Initially, it had begun to slowly fade, as her mage-sight determined that shed seen it, but as she maintained her focus, keeping her gaze locked on the movements, it became clear once again.
Huh.
Holly and Lyn were looking at her strangely. Dear? Are you alright?
Tala kept following the person with her sight as they continued on their way. Yes. A person came into range, beyond the wall, and I could see them.
Holly glanced at the door, then back at Tala. Through the wall? Are you sure?
Tala nodded, still not turning. And Im still seeing them, even though they are close to three times as far away, now, as when they first came into sight.
That part makes sense. If you focus on something, no matter the distance, your mage-sight will show the magic of it, but She hesitated. Is it clear? Are you sure your eyes arent tricking you?
Tala quirked a smile. I can count their heartbeats, if you want. She nodded. Im sure.
Focus on me, Im going to go through the door, and I want to know if you can tell what I am doing.
Tala allowed her gaze to leave the target, and it immediately vanished. She glanced towards Holly but made sure not to focus on her. Ummm Id rather not. Youre kind of painful to look at.
Holly blinked. I think I should be insulted.
Talas smile grew. I meant that your magic is incredibly bright. It overwhelmed me for a moment there. Theres also a strange underlying hue to the whole thing. Do you have spell-lines in the air around you? How is that even possible?
Hmmmm Holly scratched the side of her face. You were still adjusting Would you be willing to try again? She did not answer any of Talas questions.
Tala hesitated, then nodded. If Im looking at it, I can ask more pointed questions. I suppose so. She allowed her focus to fall on Holly, and the woman immediately began to glow, her spell-lines becoming easily visible, even through her clothing. The light began to become painful, but something within Tala seemed to shift, and while she could tell the power, as she perceived it, was continuing to grow, it was no longer difficult to take in. Interesting. I can see now. It looks different than before, and it also seems a little hazy? She smiled. Material Creator? Are you doing something to shield your magic?
Thats right, I began my career as a Material Creator. As to the second, thats not your concern right now.
There was too much in that answer to unpack at the moment, so Tala decided to press on with the matter at hand. Are all your spell-lines bent towards the understanding and enacting of inscribings? All those I can see. It sounds like shes masking or altering how she looks to me.
It is my life, dear.
Its more than that. Portions of Hollys magic were devoted to connecting with various knowledge archives. Most inscribers that Tala knew of would use tablets, or other such items, empowered for the purpose; Holly used herself. It was less materially efficient, for that specific task, but Tala would bet her last copper that it saved Holly a great deal over-all in time, metal, and power. I dont understand all the archive functions.
Hollys eyes widened, just slightly, and Tala saw power ripple through the lines around the older womans eyes. Those are on my ribs, dear. You can see them?
Yes. But what is the-
Holly placed her hand over Talas mouth, cutting her off. Holly then cleared her throat. That is not something we should discuss. Maybe when we know each other better Her eyes flicked to Lyn, then to the door. And when we can have time to talk alone.
Lyns eyes narrowed, but she seemed to decide not to say anything.
Hollys hand came away, and Tala shrugged. As you wish. Shed decided not to press. The Core Archives does sound like something without wide access. She found herself grinning. If Holly inscribes administrative Mages, it would not have been difficult for her to give herself those same magics. I wonder how many such secrets she has made use of over the years? There was something more. The fact that shed seen something real, which Holly didnt expect, meant that she wasnt being deceived by what she saw, at least not entirely. Maybe, Holly is just hiding the spell-lines in the air? The underlying yellow hue was also missing, now. Ill figure it out eventually, I suppose.
Holly was watching Tala carefully, but when the younger girl didnt say more, Holly nodded. Very well. It seems that your mage-sight will be even more useful that wed thought, if it can pick up power even through solid objects. You should receive some sort of signal if magic pops up, or changes, outside of your line of sight, but Ive honestly no idea how that will manifest, or if there is some sort of threshold involved.
Tala nodded. I was wondering about that. The schema we discussed seemed to have allowed that. It almost looked like it would take a threshold to open that portion of my sight, but afterwards it would function much the same as that within my normal vision.
Could be. That was my hope, but poor is the fool who counts on hopes and wishes. If that is how you understood it, then thats the most likely way it will function.
Lyn cleared her throat. As wonderful as this is, I think that Tala is due a good night of sleep in a normal bed. She glanced to Tala. Can you apply youriron, at my house? After a moment she added. I would prefer if there werent any cleanup required, when you are done.
Tala nodded. Absolutely. Ive gotten very practiced at keeping the iron contained. The Masters at the academy were quite cross, until I was able to perfect the process. In truth, theyd never approved, but at least theyd stopped slating her for punishment, after shed stopped contaminating random parts of the school.
In that case, we should be off. Lyn turned and gave Holly a half bow. Mistress.
Holly bowed tiredly in return. Mistress. Until next time.
Tala bowed as well and came up smiling. Thank you, Mistress Holly. I suppose I will see you in just over two weeks!
See that you do. Holly winked. Take care, child.
I will.
Without another word, Tala and Lyn departed, heading for Lyns home and a good nights sleep.
Chapter 8: Delivery and New SightTala looked from Lyn to Holly. Speaking of mage-sightAhh, yes. I left off the four connection points that will activate that portion of your inscribing. I thought it better to not add that on top of everything else. Additionally, we still need to discuss the changes, adding to the wisdom of the delay.But I should just be able to activate She hesitated, then sighed. You made that a passive enhancement as well, didnt you.Holly grinned. Of course! Once connected and activated, it will show you any magic source you focus on, but otherwise only bring new, or changing, sources of magic to your awareness. It is really quite genius.If you do say so yourself, Lyn muttered under her breath just before taking a sip of coffee; Tala heard it perfectly.Tala grinned, but then turned back to Holly. Why?Many a Mage has been undone because they didnt know to activate their mage-sight, or because they were overwhelmed by the information provided, as Lyn implied. This gets around that problem.Tala was unconvinced. So, why doesnt everyone use your method?Because, without the mental enhancing inscriptions, which we added to you, their mind would pop like an egg thrown at a wall.Vivid.Holly shrugged. Accurate.So, my enhancements will allow for this?Based on my calculations.Tala had been about to take another bite, but she paused. Say again?From everything I can determine, you should be fine.You could just say, Yes. That would be a lie. I strive for honesty with my clients.Tala set her donut aside, cleaned off her hands, and then rubbed her face. How can you not know? She pointed at her own cheek, where she presumed that the spell-lines were waiting activation. They are already on my face, Mistress Holly. How can you not know?Because no one else has been quite like you, dear. This is all new.Tala groaned. She did have a moment of reflexive relief that groaning didnt cause any discomfort.In a strange turn, Lyn patted Tala gently on the back. Based on the brief contact, Tala noticed a ring she hadnt taken note of, before. Through Talas distraction, she still heard Lyns reassurance. Think of it this way, Mistress Tala: Would you prefer someone who takes a risk, all the while assuring you it was perfectly safe, or someone who was perfectly aware of the risks, honest about them, and actively worked to reduce them?She sighed. Fine. A moments thought brought to mind a memory of Lyns ring, as shed obviously seen it earlier. It was incredibly disconcerting for Tala, remembering something, in vivid detail, that she hadnt noticed before. She twisted, looking at Lyns hand, and confirming the ring was as shed expected. Whats with the ring?Lyn blinked at her. ItsIts just a ring. Ive had it for years. She frowned. Youve never seen me without it.Holly was grinning. Shell be noticing things she missed, before. The ring is likely just the first she vocalized.Tala was staring at the ring, seemingly unable to divert her attention, as her mind showed her a dozen memories of Lyn, all including that ring. How did INot notice, dear?Yeah. It seems so obvious.Each of us is blind to some things. You just didnt take note of it.Tala looked at the woman and was suddenly struck by the weariness in her. Hollys posture was good, but not as perfect as when Tala had first met her. Her intricate inscribing was darker beneath her eyes, and there were subtle lines across her features. Mistress Holly? Are you alright?The older woman blinked at her. YesAhh I see you are actually beginning to use your increased perception.You look exhausted.She smiled. Oh, I am. Ive gotten some sleep since we began, but not much. As soon as we discuss your mage-sight and activate it, I plan to sleep for She thought for a moment, then laughed. For as long as I can, probably.Well, we should get to it, then. Tala took the last two bites of breakfast in a single mouthful and washed it down with the remains of her coffee. Talas eyes swept over Lyn, and she noted that she could now take a better guess at the other womans age. Twenty-five. She has a full five years on me. That was a funny thought; Lyn acted like a peer, but she also acted like she was Talas mother.Honestly, Tala felt a bit foolish. Any Mage, lacking a master as Lyn clearly did, would have had to finish their time as a mageling, which could take anywhere from three to ten years. The fact that Lyn was still so young, and a full Mage, spoke very well to her abilities.How will I be perceived? I skipped that whole process She wondered if she would ever learn all that she would have under a master. No going back, now.Standing, Tala looked down at her two companions. Shall we?They smiled up at her, and she could easily see their agreement and care in the expressions. I am luckier than I knew.Holly and Lyn stood almost as one, their smiles still playing across their faces.Yes. The quicker we get back to my shop, the sooner I can sleep.* * *The original appearance of this chapter can be found at Nvl1n.They were back at the front of Hollys warehouse, door open for re-entry, when a mans voice interrupted them, Mistress Tala! Wait a moment. Tala heard a power behind the voice; the volume wasnt great, but the words carried clearly and easily across the distance. The tone and intonation denoted control and ready strength.She turned and saw Ashin striding across the road, several packages in hand. Noticing things that I havent noticed before isodd. She quirked an eyebrow. Guardsman?He smiled slightly, his eyes flicking to her face, arms, and bare feet, seeming to take in her new inscribings. Your apothecary was quite distraught when you didnt return to claim your items. He lifted the few small packages slightly, indicating their contents.Oh! Thank you. She stepped forward quickly to take them from him. Once the packages were in hand, she paused. He didnt leave, or say anything, and her newly prominent senses were screaming at her that he was feeling suddenly awkward. Tala glanced at Lyn. ImIm not certain if anything else is required? Id offer him a fee, for carrying the packages for me, butIm broke.Ashin reddened. I am right here, Mistress.Tala turned back to him. Im hardly going to ask you if its appropriate to give you money.His red features darkened. Are you implying that I would lie? His hand seemed to be drifting towards his sword, but the motion struck her as subconscious. Interesting. He has an unconscious reflex to be ready to defend his honor with violence, but not an immediate drive towards such.No, of course not. Just that She hesitated. I had been concerned that hed lie That was a bit uncharitable, she supposed. I apologize for the offense. Ive had a taxing few days. Is there anything else I can do for you?Ashin took a deep breath and seemed to wrangle down his own emotions, bringing his hands forward to clasp in front of his waist.Thoughts bearing words paled, and any attempt at description was rendered utterly inadequate to convey the overpowering radiance of the womans spell-lines, and the power and intricacies there-in. It was more than that, though. There almost seemed to be power in the air around Holly, which made no sense. She has spell-lines that arent a part of her body?How? Taken as a whole, it was a tapestry of utter mastery, meticulously constructed on a bright yellow canvas.Talas mind simply couldnt hold, let alone understand, the complexity and depth.That simple glance caused her consciousness to flicker, and she was left with a hole in her memory and a single-word impression.CREATE.Tala could not have stated what quadrant Holly was. Tala wondered if shed ever find out, if the woman didnt choose to share that information.After the flicker of mental blackness, her perception seemed to return to a normal pace, and she was able to turn her head, scanning her surroundings more fully.Each item was briefly highlighted, and their marginal magical affinities noted.Nothing was surprising to her, or even new, as shed always known the inherent connections all things had to various aspects of power. She'd sometimes even seen those, in the past.After a long minute, during which Holly and Lyn regarded her carefully, if silently, Tala finally smiled. I thinkI think Im adjusting.Lyn let out what seemed to be a long-held breath. Good. I like this robe. She gestured down at her cream colored, Mages robe. Id hate to have it soiled by exploding heads. After a moments hesitation, she amended. Well, an exploding head.Holly sighed. As I explained. The bursting would have been entirely internal. The most wed have seen was some bleeding from her eyes.Tala cleared her throat. SoWere clear?Holly smiled. We are. We wont do the deeper dimensions of your inscriptions on the rest of your body until you return, and well save the tailored inscriptions on your internal organs for some time after that. She hesitated. Maybe, well do it at the same time. Well have to see. She smiled.Tala spun her right forefinger in a circle in the air. Yay! I cant wait.Just then, a form walked into range of her mage-sight, across and behind the closed door. Tala could tell by the lack of strictly patterned, concentrated aura, that they were un-inscribed, but even so, she was able to see traces of power looping through them in flowing circuits. The circuits had an odd look, as if they were spell-lines, but of a different metal and design than any shed yet seen. Is that their circulatory system?She followed the form as it passed. Initially, it had begun to slowly fade, as her mage-sight determined that shed seen it, but as she maintained her focus, keeping her gaze locked on the movements, it became clear once again.Huh.Holly and Lyn were looking at her strangely. Dear? Are you alright?Tala kept following the person with her sight as they continued on their way. Yes. A person came into range, beyond the wall, and I could see them.Holly glanced at the door, then back at Tala. Through the wall? Are you sure?Tala nodded, still not turning. And Im still seeing them, even though they are close to three times as far away, now, as when they first came into sight.That part makes sense. If you focus on something, no matter the distance, your mage-sight will show the magic of it, but She hesitated. Is it clear? Are you sure your eyes arent tricking you?Tala quirked a smile. I can count their heartbeats, if you want. She nodded. Im sure.Focus on me, Im going to go through the door, and I want to know if you can tell what I am doing.Tala allowed her gaze to leave the target, and it immediately vanished. She glanced towards Holly but made sure not to focus on her. Ummm Id rather not. Youre kind of painful to look at.Holly blinked. I think I should be insulted.Talas smile grew. I meant that your magic is incredibly bright. It overwhelmed me for a moment there. Theres also a strange underlying hue to the whole thing. Do you have spell-lines in the air around you? How is that even possible?Hmmmm Holly scratched the side of her face. You were still adjusting Would you be willing to try again? She did not answer any of Talas questions.Tala hesitated, then nodded. If Im looking at it, I can ask more pointed questions. I suppose so. She allowed her focus to fall on Holly, and the woman immediately began to glow, her spell-lines becoming easily visible, even through her clothing. The light began to become painful, but something within Tala seemed to shift, and while she could tell the power, as she perceived it, was continuing to grow, it was no longer difficult to take in. Interesting. I can see now. It looks different than before, and it also seems a little hazy? She smiled. Material Creator? Are you doing something to shield your magic?Thats right, I began my career as a Material Creator. As to the second, thats not your concern right now.There was too much in that answer to unpack at the moment, so Tala decided to press on with the matter at hand. Are all your spell-lines bent towards the understanding and enacting of inscribings? All those I can see. It sounds like shes masking or altering how she looks to me.It is my life, dear.Its more than that. Portions of Hollys magic were devoted to connecting with various knowledge archives. Most inscribers that Tala knew of would use tablets, or other such items, empowered for the purpose; Holly used herself. It was less materially efficient, for that specific task, but Tala would bet her last copper that it saved Holly a great deal over-all in time, metal, and power. I dont understand all the archive functions.Hollys eyes widened, just slightly, and Tala saw power ripple through the lines around the older womans eyes. Those are on my ribs, dear. You can see them?Yes. But what is the-Holly placed her hand over Talas mouth, cutting her off. Holly then cleared her throat. That is not something we should discuss. Maybe when we know each other better Her eyes flicked to Lyn, then to the door. And when we can have time to talk alone.Lyns eyes narrowed, but she seemed to decide not to say anything.Hollys hand came away, and Tala shrugged. As you wish. Shed decided not to press. The Core Archives does sound like something without wide access. She found herself grinning. If Holly inscribes administrative Mages, it would not have been difficult for her to give herself those same magics. I wonder how many such secrets she has made use of over the years? There was something more. The fact that shed seen something real, which Holly didnt expect, meant that she wasnt being deceived by what she saw, at least not entirely. Maybe, Holly is just hiding the spell-lines in the air? The underlying yellow hue was also missing, now. Ill figure it out eventually, I suppose.Holly was watching Tala carefully, but when the younger girl didnt say more, Holly nodded. Very well. It seems that your mage-sight will be even more useful that wed thought, if it can pick up power even through solid objects. You should receive some sort of signal if magic pops up, or changes, outside of your line of sight, but Ive honestly no idea how that will manifest, or if there is some sort of threshold involved.Tala nodded. I was wondering about that. The schema we discussed seemed to have allowed that. It almost looked like it would take a threshold to open that portion of my sight, but afterwards it would function much the same as that within my normal vision.Could be. That was my hope, but poor is the fool who counts on hopes and wishes. If that is how you understood it, then thats the most likely way it will function.Lyn cleared her throat. As wonderful as this is, I think that Tala is due a good night of sleep in a normal bed. She glanced to Tala. Can you apply youriron, at my house? After a moment she added. I would prefer if there werent any cleanup required, when you are done.Tala nodded. Absolutely. Ive gotten very practiced at keeping the iron contained. The Masters at the academy were quite cross, until I was able to perfect the process. In truth, theyd never approved, but at least theyd stopped slating her for punishment, after shed stopped contaminating random parts of the school.In that case, we should be off. Lyn turned and gave Holly a half bow. Mistress.Holly bowed tiredly in return. Mistress. Until next time.Tala bowed as well and came up smiling. Thank you, Mistress Holly. I suppose I will see you in just over two weeks!See that you do. Holly winked. Take care, child.I will.Without another word, Tala and Lyn departed, heading for Lyns home and a good nights sleep.
