Chapter 126 A big battle
But just when Bai Ze was about to approach, two double-S mechas transformed into snowy lights that lit up at the same time.
Zhou Jiuya instantly recognized that it was Cecilia's Mo Yu, and the other one was Leinster's mecha Prisoner Eagle.
"Cecilia——!!!"
The most hated people in this world last week were the people of the Illusion God Cult, especially Leinster and Cecilia. The former ambushed him, causing him to fail to rescue his brother in time, and later kidnapped Jiang Ci.
As for Cecilia, if she hadn’t been the one to tell the truth, Bai Min wouldn’t have died!Not to mention, this crazy woman cut open Bai Min's stomach and dug out Jiang Ci.
The enemies were extremely jealous when they saw each other, Wan Jiang immediately pounced on Mo Yu, and the two sides fought together.On the other side, Bai Ze and Qiu Ying rushed towards He Zhun's broken life capsule at the same time.
The collision of swords and guns produced dazzling fire.
Leinster clearly noticed the change in Bai Ze from the first moment of the fight, because the silver gun completely changed his style. He made a mistake in his first prediction and was instantly knocked away.
"Varied!"
Leinster's eyes widened, and countless buildings collapsed in an instant. He barely managed to steady his body, and when he looked up, he saw Bai Ze leaning over and grabbing the rescue capsule.At this time, the shell of the rescue capsule had been completely shattered by the energy shock wave just now.
Jiang Ci made a decisive decision and stopped entangled, and quickly controlled the mecha to evacuate.
"Bai Ze opens the landing port! Bring him in!!!"
Wow——
Many mechanical tentacles stretched out from above the cockpit, catching the broken rescue capsule instantly.Bai Ze immediately cleaned up the broken shell of the rescue capsule, and then called up the medical equipment to prepare for rescue, but the next second, the mechanical tentacles stopped.
"Ah Ci, this..."
"What's wrong?!"
Jiang Ci glanced back hastily.But at this glance, he was stunned.
...Stigmata!
He Zhun was actually injected with the stigmata!!!
At this moment, the young man's body was covered in blood, his expression was painful, and there were squirming golden holy marks under his broken clothes, and those things were repairing his wounds.But there was no relevant data in Bai Ze's medical procedures, and he didn't know how to start.
"Cough... cough cough..."
He Zhun slowly sat up from the rescue cabin. During his movements, there was a sound of some kind of bones being reconnected and being straightened.He was in a daze for a few seconds, and his eyes gradually focused on Jiang Ci's face.
"..."
Probably neither of them expected to meet again under such circumstances. As the closest family members, they didn't even know how to speak at this time.
Jiang Ci looked at the young man whose face was covered in blood, with heartache and sadness spreading in his chest.
Now he already knows from his uncle that He Zhun's family was silenced to save him. If it weren't for He Zhun's father, Jiang Ci would have died in the few months after he was born.
He Zhun has been carrying hatred for so many years, and he is one of the reasons why he has reached this point.No wonder this person didn't tell him anything, no wonder He Zhun didn't trust the empire, no wonder he wanted to walk alone.
"He Zhun, are you okay?"
Jiang Ci was the first to break the silence. He wanted to express his concern, and he also wanted to explain to He Zhun immediately about the political cleanup.
"Listen to me, twenty..."
"That's enough Jiang Ci!"
Of course, He Zhun knew that the political cleanup more than 20 years ago was just a show. He knew it from the beginning.But now He Zhun can't let Jiang Ci tell the truth because his body is equipped with a bug.
The Pope spared him his life, but he also spared something else.
He Zhun gestured at his throat,
"Do you think it makes sense to say this hypocritically now?"
"..."
Jiang Ci noticed that special movement and instantly understood what he meant.
It means that what he is saying now is wrong and it is not convenient for him to say it.
Just when Jiang Ci was trying to find a way to further safely communicate with He Zhun, Leinster rushed over like an angry beast.
"Jiang Ci——!!!"
Bai Ze's movements paused for a moment.The recent surge in mental power threshold has raised the empathy between Jiang Ci and Bai Ze to a peak. His current mental power threshold has reached one thousand two, while Leinster is only in his early eight hundred, so even if Bai Ze's mental power threshold just now isThe stiffness did not allow Prison Eagle to find any flaws.
At this time, Bai Ze immediately shot the prisoner's cockpit with a backhand shot.The angle of this shot was so tricky that Leinster was unable to avoid it for a moment in the electric light and flint. He could only cross his swords and barely block this powerful blow.
what happened?!
Who is driving the Baize?!
Leinster's eyes were filled with uncertainty. For a moment, he was not even sure whether Bai Ze's pilot was Jiang Ci, because the opponent's combat effectiveness had made a qualitative leap in half a year, and it was completely different from Zhou Jiuya's before.It is a style of broad opening and closing, but it is cunning and fast, making it impossible to defend against guns.
This familiar feeling reminded Leinster of Huo Chao, no...no, it should be Huo Xiafeng whom he had fought against for the first time.
Leinster, who had lived for more than three hundred years, was very aggrieved, because at this moment, for the first time, he felt like being beaten by a kid in his twenties.
On the other side, when it was confirmed that Jiang Ci was suppressing his opponent and beating him, Huo Xianfeng gave up stepping forward to help. After all, now was the best time to test the results of his teaching.He waved his hand casually, and the next second the entire sky was instantly covered by dense Zerg.
As a king, he generally does not need to take action personally in wars. He needs to control the overall situation.The existence of the forbidden abyss allows this 3S mecha to hover quietly in the air, which is enough deterrence to prevent anyone from rashly launching an attack.
"The Zerg...the Zerg are coming in!!!"
"Defensive barrier...repair the defensive barrier immediately!!!"
"It's too late...the energy can't keep up! The energy can't keep up!"
"..."
The defensive barrier of the military base is not as good as that of Mingcheng, and the self-destruction energy of the aircraft carrier is too great, opening a huge gap. Even if countless personnel in the central control room quickly issued repair orders, the closing speed could not keep up.The Zerg army desperately poured in.
"Quick, quick, quick!!! Order all the fighter planes to rush forward, block the opening, and buy time for the defense barrier to be repaired!!!"
The next second, dozens of fighter jets received the order, turned on their maximum horsepower, and rushed towards the breach one after another.But halfway through, the pilots jumped out of the rescue cabins one after another.
Huo Xianfeng knew what he was doing in this step.Because if missiles or other artillery fire is fired, the hole will only get bigger and bigger, so the only way now is to let the fighter planes rush in, push out some of the incoming Zerg, and then speed up the repair of the barrier.
But he didn't care, and he didn't think this little trick could stop the Zerg invasion.
But obviously the bishop in charge of repairing the defensive barrier in the main control room didn't think so. They watched the invading Zerg being rushed out by a series of fighter planes. However, the fighters that rushed out were eaten up in just ten seconds. It was terrifying.The scene makes any human being unable to help but tremble.
But fortunately, the barrier is about to be repaired.
"Okay...it needs to be repaired!!!"
There was celebration in the control room.
But at this time, Huo Xianfeng looked away from the barrier and let out a sneer.
"Innocent"
At this time, the densely packed Zerg army seemed to have received some order, and moved out of the way neatly like Moses parting the sea. The leader, General Osa, pressed down with his huge body, almost covering most of the sky.
The next second, the newly repaired defensive barrier was now like a thin layer of paper, with a long gap cut open by the sharp blade of the forelimb.
At this moment, all the mechas that were fighting fiercely stopped at the same time, and they all looked up at the same time.
In the endless smoke and artillery fire, I could see the majestic and cold face of Forbidden Abyss looking down from a high position, and it actually seemed a bit cruel at this moment.The light at dusk coated the huge body with a layer of red-golden brilliance.
But soon, the glow of the setting sun behind it was swallowed up by the metal.
At this moment, the colorful world seemed to have been forcibly erased by an invisible hand, leaving only the gray and darkness representing death and fear.
The late guests tore open the defensive barrier in the sky, as if they were sticking their heads out from the abyss at the end of another world. Countless pairs of greedy and violent compound eyes were densely packed all over the sky, and the terrifying mouthparts exhaled cold and gloomy sounds.Breath.
At this moment, not only the church's army, but also the First Legion as an ally felt some extreme terror and fear.It was like being suddenly dragged into a sinking swamp, but struggling to no avail, and could only drown.
At this moment, only Forbidden Abyss could see the King of the Zerg in the cockpit, and saw the stars of pleasure glowing in the depths of his cold and violent vertical pupils.
——He is enjoying this apocalyptic scenery.
Jin Yuan finally understood why Huo Chao arranged countless preparations for Pei Changyun and Huo Xianfeng to stand together.Because if this group of Zerg troops invaded not the Holy Dew Star, but the capital star of the empire.
That is the true end of mankind.
Leinster had almost encountered an unstoppable defeat. He didn't even have time to care about Jiang Ci anymore, because at this moment he was knocked away by a huge monster in an instant.
"Damn-!"
The entire base was in chaos, with gunfire everywhere. The sharp and frightening screams of humans were swallowed up by the even more terrifying screams of the monsters almost as soon as they came out, as if they were as powerless as a drop of water submerged in the sea.
At this moment, fear and shock filled every believer's face, so much so that even their expressions became distorted and gray.Countless buildings collapsed and shattered, like toppled dominoes, and the Zerg army that had absorbed nearly the entire Ming City had regained a new lease of life.
At this moment, Cecilia's expression was almost horrified, and her voice was almost breaking.
"Open the second channel immediately!!!"
Wow——
The space crack that had not been closed just now suddenly enlarged, three times in size.
Countless densely packed mechas poured out of the black cracks.
"That is……!"
Jiang Ci noticed it instantly.
Those mechas are not normal humanoid mechas.Instead, they were the Zerg mechas they had seen on Asparagus before, as well as various weird spliced forms.But there are many, many, and endless streams.
As soon as these mechas came out, they rushed directly towards the Zerg army, and the two sides fought together.
At this time, Bai Ze's electronic sound passed through the biochip and sounded directly in Jiang Ci's mind.
"That's a mecha transformed from the shells of Zerg corpses, a masterpiece of the Saint's chief disciple Angus."
But this was not what Bai Ze said, but what He Zhun said through the connection with Bai Ze.
The Illusion God Religion is in decline.Because after the alliance collapsed, almost 70% of the surviving humans were transferred to Hengyun Star by Pei Changyun.No one can provide a large amount of manpower and material resources to the church.
"Although the Illusion God Cult has technology, it has been worn out over the years and cannot be supplied by large-scale weapon production. Angus proposed that the outer shell of the Zerg can replace the outer mecha. And they also have a way to make the Zerg nerve fluid into energy. In order toIt saves manpower, so it is more like a drone, unified and commanded by the main control system in Angus’ hand.”
The electronic voice speaks very quickly, without a word of nonsense, and quickly outputs information.
"Cecilia also brought Huo Chao's clone and possessed a large number of mental shielding devices. I don't know how Huo Xianfeng is connected with Huo Chao, but it should be Huo Xianfeng's one-way mental power.Establishing a connection similar to that between humans and mechas. Bernard had already noticed this when the Huo Chao Xingbo was exposed."
So He Zhun took the lead and submitted the analysis report to the Pope.
"Jiang Ci, Cecilia is your mother's apostle. She reported it because the Pope already knew about Bai Min's escape. Cecilia could only use this disguise to know their hunting plan, but she doesn't know yet.Her purpose is to continue to stay in the church, so we can only roughly judge that she can become an ally."
"Huo Chao's clone is not just a political tool to fight Pei Changyun. He definitely has other uses, because the stigmata on him are different from everyone else. So it's best to deal with it as soon as possible."
A large amount of information poured into Jiang Ci's mind at once. He quickly analyzed and categorized it, extracted the key points, and then immediately asked Bai Ze to synchronize the information with Zhou Jiuya and Huo Xianfeng.
The next second, Bai Ze flew out and pounced on the nearest Zerg mecha. His silver spear pierced it and instantly nailed it to the wall of the building next to it.
call out!
The next second, the silver ring flew out of Bai Ze's chest, turned into a saber and pierced the brain from the compound eyes. Then countless mechanical tentacles stretched out from the saber, quickly connecting to the invasion.
"Signal decryption in progress..."
"Signal decryption in progress..."
XiaoJiang Ci now needs to find the main control system of Angus.and destroy it immediately.As for the clones of Cecilia and Huo Chao, they can only be left to others.
"Ding"
"Ah Ci! The source of the command signal has been found, underground!!!"
The next second, Jiang Ci directly pulled it to the maximum energy threshold. The silver gun quickly charged up, and the dazzling lightning shot up. The next second, the long gun suddenly came down with thousands of thunders. Under countless artillery fire and mechas,Create a bloody path in the fight.
boom!!!
The ground, which was almost in ruins, suddenly shattered and collapsed with a rumble, revealing the huge underground space below.Jiang Ci stared at it for a few seconds, then asked Xiao X to quickly scan the building structure below and issue commands simultaneously——
"Third echelon, gather close to me immediately! There is an urgent mission."
The Major General's tone was cold and serious,
"The medical team will come immediately to receive the specially wounded and evacuate the battlefield immediately."
Of course Jiang Ci knew He Zhun's purpose and undercover identity, but the church had already installed bugs and injected stigma into him, not to mention that He Zhun had provided so much key information.It was obvious that He Zhun would probably die if he went back.So this time he understood He Zhun, but he didn't intend to put the person back.
So the Major General very coldly added a supplementary order to the medical team,
"Special management is allowed for this injured person in accordance with Article 238 of the regulations. If necessary, compulsory control methods that do not harm personal safety can be adopted."
He Zhun is so smart, he always has various ways to deal with it, so special situations are treated specially.
"Yes, Major General Jiang Ci."
The captain of the medical team quickly confirmed the order and began to prepare a special medical cabin and related instruments.
"etc!!!"
This was He Zhun's voice. It was obvious that he had no idea that Jiang Ci, who had verbally retained him last time they met, would mercilessly detain him this time.
And he had just finished giving so much information. In addition to helping, he also planned to join the war and exchange some other information with the other party. But Jiang Ci threw him away after hearing the information???
This behavior is simply no better than that of a scumbag cat who has deceived all the dried fish and walked away without being touched!!!
"Jiang Ci, you can't..."
He Zhun opened his eyes wide and wanted to say something eagerly, but before he could finish his words, he was directly ejected from the cockpit by Bai Ze and was quickly received by the medical team who rushed over.
The whole process was extremely smooth, and every step was in line with the First Army's standards for treating the wounded on the battlefield.If it could be recorded, it could be used as a teaching model in military academies.
After confirming that the medical team began to withdraw from the battlefield, Jiang Ci's eyes returned to the collapsed underground entrance.
"Ah Ci! The scanning of the building structure has been completed and the 3D model map is being created. It will take one minute."
LittleAfter getting the map, Bai Ze immediately jumped down and turned into a meteor that instantly sank into the underground entrance.At the same time, dozens of A-level military mechas escaped from the battle without hesitation and quickly followed Bai Ze into the ground.
At the same time, Jin Yuan and Wan Jiang simultaneously received the message from Bai Ze.
Huo Xianfeng knew that Jiang Ci had gone to find Angus's main control system. Although he had full trust in Jiang Ci's current combat effectiveness, he thought about it and sent a Zerg scout unit to follow him.
As for himself.
Huo Xianfeng turned his head and looked into the distance behind him.
A double-S mecha that looked like a forbidden abyss was flying towards him quickly.
The driver inside is Huo Chao's clone.
It has to be said that everything this church does falls into the minefield that Wang can’t stand the most.If he could barely hold back his anger when he saw a large number of mechas made from Zerg corpses just now, then at this moment, he felt that there was no need to suppress it.
The golden vertical pupils that had always been cold now seemed to be filled with flowing molten lava. Because of the extreme murderous intent and anger, they even had a dazzling red gold feel, so hot that it seemed to burn everything.
boom!
The next second, the two sides instantly fought together.
The two similar halberds collided and produced countless dazzling sparks, making bursts of loud noises no less than the exploding cannonballs.
The originally chaotic battlefield was completely cleared up, because no other mecha warship could maintain stable flight and combat amid such violent airflow and energy impact.They were like ships on a stormy sea, completely thrown away.
Countless imperial soldiers and believers were hit on the ground by the aftermath, but they had no intention of continuing to fight at this moment and could only stare up at this magnificent spectacle with their mouths open.
The two super-giant mechas, which are rare in the world, are like gods and demons fighting in the apocalypse. They collide and impact. The energy aftermath of each confrontation impacts the surroundings. Strong pressure radiates from the center of the battle group to the entire space, bursting out countless waves.The intertwined arc-shaped lightning flashed indescribably magnificent colors in the dim sky.
"Two...Two Forbidden Abyss?!"
"No, the one I was pressed against is obviously a fake. It just looks similar."
Zhou Jiuya's voice appeared in the public communication channel of the First Legion.
"Everyone withdraws from the fighting area, reorganizes the formation, and continues fighting."
"yes!"
Zhou Jiuya turned off the communication channel and looked at the two mechas in the distance. It was obvious that even if the other Forbidden Abyss was a fake, its external machine was built according to the 3S mecha, otherwise it would not be able to withstand it.The current confrontation.
It seems that the Huan Shen Cult has spent a lot of money this time, but even so, how can a fake defeat Huo Xianfeng?
Zhou Jiuya also received the news from Bai Ze, and he also had the same questions as He Zhun. It was obviously a given failure, why did the other party have to put in so much effort?
But now none of them could find the answer. After more than half an hour, the furious Huo Xianfeng finally suppressed the opponent completely. The halberd directly broke through the energy defense cover, pierced the cockpit door, and then made a loud bang.Immediately nailed the mecha to the ground.
Buzz——
The scarlet electronic sound flickered twice, and finally faded into darkness.
"Huo Xianfeng! I have taken care of... Angus' main control system. I will be back soon. How is the situation over there?"
Jiang Ci's breathing was a little breathless, as if he had just gone through a fierce battle.Huo Xianfeng sent a Zerg scout to follow him. Naturally, he knew the whole situation. He raised his head and glanced, and sure enough, he found that the Zerg mechas that had been attacking frantically began to stagger, and seemed to be in chaos.
Tsk, he is indeed Major General Jiang Ci.
As expected of his wife.
Huo Xianfeng's sullen mood finally improved a little. He thought about it and then gave a compliment,
"Aci baby, you are so amazing."
"...?"
Why did this guy suddenly have a fit???
But Jiang Ci suddenly remembered, oh, by the way, Huo Xianfeng is still in the courtship period.So he pursed his lips and decided to appease his boyfriend who wanted to pay attention during the courtship period, so he also replied,
"Brother Xiao Huo, you are also very strong. You are really handsome today."
"!!!"
The corners of Huo Xianfeng's mouth curled up, feeling comfortable.
At this moment, Zhou Jiuya's voice came faintly from the public communication channel——
"cough."
He didn't say anything, just coughed slightly.
But the implication is very, very clear. The battle is not over yet. What are you two showing on the public channel?!!!
Although it was just a slight cough, Jiang Ci instantly recognized the voice of his little uncle.
Bai Ze reminded in a low voice,
"Ah Ci, the big devil just opened the public communication."
Jiang Ci: "..."
Huo Xianfeng——!!!
This guy did it on purpose!
The author has something to say:
ps: I won’t write such a long explanation later, feel free to read it.
My personal writing level is really limited. This is only my second Danmei. The plot is not well controlled, and there are problems with character creation. There are indeed many flaws. I didn’t say that I think my writing is perfect in every aspect. It’s just me.The level is like this. I tried my best and put the most thought into it. My hand speed is slow. In order to maintain such a large amount of updates, I basically spend more than ten hours a day coding (no exaggeration).
So this article can really only be written like this. My writing habits and style are like this. I have been working hard to improve them, but they still have not met the expectations of some readers. It is because of my lack of ability and my low writing level. I am sorry..
The copywriting has also been written. You are welcome to discuss the plot, but I decline writing guidance because it is difficult for everyone to agree. Thank you for your understanding.
What follows is my personal understanding and interpretation of the characters, which are really very personal. Everyone agrees without bowing their heads. You don’t have to read it, you don’t have to agree. It’s up to you whether you like the character or not, or even like this article.
(Originally, I wanted to delete all my subsequent comments, but I thought some readers might say that I had a guilty conscience, so I’ll leave them here. I sent out red envelopes to appease the comment section, and I selected a two-point rating in batches. It wasn’t just a comment.Choose those who speak to me.)
What follows is the previous explanation.
“If you don’t want to see it, you can skip it.”
"It's really long. I don't recommend reading it. You can skip it."
He Zhun's father helped save Jiang Ci, who was infected by the stigma, but his whole family was silenced as a result.
It is not an exaggeration to say that He Zhun's family died for Jiang Ci.
He Zhun is the only survivor and knows the truth.So at first he resented why Jiang Jinsheng came to their home, but later because of Jiang Jinsheng's company and love, he understood and liked this gentle Uncle Jiang. Because he was used to being an older brother, he also liked Jiang Ci very much.good.But these cannot stop He Zhun's revenge.
It is true that he has been unscrupulous, even cunning and despicable, but this is because he has no choice.He is a beta, he does not have the perverted fighting power of Xiaofeng, nor does he meet Huo Chao to escort him like Pei Changyun.And all He Zhun has is himself.His own body, this body includes "sex" and "mind".
He trembled in the church and climbed up at all costs. The purpose was to find his enemy. At the same time, he also wanted to find out what the stigmata was.His father and Uncle Jiang had been tortured by the stigmata for hundreds of years, and he wanted to find a way to escape. This was why He Zhun stayed in the Huan Shen Cult.
The above is the premise.
Then here are some answers to the questions raised by little angels in the comment area.
1. Regarding He Zhun’s suspicion of moral kidnapping.
Answer: Not really.He didn't grab Jiang Ci, he grabbed Pei Changyun's group and said, my family is kind to you, so you must repay me, you must accommodate me, and you must save me.He has always been on his way to revenge alone, and has never asked for help or understanding from anyone in the protagonist group.
2. Jiang Ci OOC before the revision of the previous chapter.
Answer: Before the revision, Jiang Ci ignored Xiao Huo and went directly to rescue He Zhun.After the revision, Jiang Ci responded by asking Xiao Huo to wait, and added two sentences to emphasize that He Zhun was about to die.In fact, before the revision, I personally felt that Jiang Ci did not have OOC, because in an emergency, it was normal for him to have no time to reply to Xiao Huo. He rushed to save people.
On one side was the brother who was about to crash in the rescue cabin, and on the other was the boyfriend who ran over to beg for praise. It was normal for the latter to immediately save He Zhun before he could respond.Moreover, the relationship between Ah Ci and Xiao Feng is close enough. It is like a young couple who has just started dating. They are always worrying about gains and losses, but a couple who loves and confirms each other deeply will not.In an emergency, Ah Ci had no time to respond, which would not have any impact on their relationship.It’s just that a lot of people in the comment area were scolding me, so I had to make some modifications.
3. He Zhunjiangzhi always relies on others to save him.
Answer: There is no wisdom, but he has indeed been a little anxious recently, because this character is not perfect. He is only five years older than Jiang Ci. It took him thirteen years to climb up to a Leinster and get close to Cecilia.Failure is normal.It's normal that he can't deal with the Pope.Otherwise, He Zhun would bring the entire Huan Shen Cult into a tailspin, and the tragic experiences of Huo Chao, Xiao Huo, and so many others because of the church would be a joke.
The current situation is that He Zhun guessed that Huo Chao would be the final killer move of the Huan Shen Cult, not just against Pei Changyun.Therefore, he must enter the most core place to get information.The secret of Shuanghuo's connection was exposed before because Xiaofeng had already exposed it himself.After the Xingbo came out, it was only a matter of time for the Huan Shen Cult to find out the connection between them.It's better to become a bargaining chip for He Zhun to take a step forward.
But He Zhun didn't always let others save him. In the first trial, he relied on himself. In the second time in the main hall, he was indeed saved by Leinster, but it was he who allowed Leinster to save him.Thirteen years of hard work and preparation. As for whether it counts as PUA, he has never suppressed Leinster, and he almost died at the hands of Leinster in the early stage. The relationship between the two of them is very complicated. In short, one is willing to fight and the other is willing to suffer.The third time the rescue capsule crashed, he was unlucky and happened to hit Xiao Huo's attack.
4. The bond between Jiang Ci and He Zhun is too deep, and it feels like they have surpassed Xiao Huo.
The answer is that their bond is indeed deep, but it does not transcend.Because Jiang Ci and He Zhun were family members who grew up together. When Jiang Ci was kidnapped, it was He Zhun who found and rescued him. When Jiang Ci was questioned by the whole world, before Huo Xianfeng showed up,, it was He Zhun who always accompanied, encouraged and supported him.
As for injections of rhodin, it is harmless.It's because only something as serious as Zhi Meihua can be used as an excuse to lure Jiang Ci to Tiandong Star.And He Zhun knew that with Ye Shu around, nothing would happen to Jiang Ci.As for Jiang Ci entering the auction house and being injured and attracting many alphas, he disguised himself and went in. He Zhun did not expect this.
And now Jiang Ci knows that He Zhun's family was brutally murdered to save him.Therefore, it is very, very normal for Jiang Ci to care about He Zhun.If he didn't care, he would be cold-blooded and look like a wolf.As for Jiang Ci, he cared more about He Zhun than Xiao Huo.Not at all, because the powerful Huo Xianfeng is safely beside Jiang Ci, while the weak He Zhun is in the den of tigers and wolves. In the last chapter, he fell to death immediately.
The elder brother is about to fall to death, and the younger brother still wants to kiss and show affection to his boyfriend?So strange, right?
Why should a family member or a lover be compared on the same scale?As for Xiao Huo being jealous, he was in the courtship period. Anyone in the world would be jealous of anyone who captured his wife's attention, even if it was a dog.It's just that at this special time, Jiang Ci was very worried about He Zhun's life safety, so part of his attention would naturally be focused on He Zhun, making Xiao Huo jealous which was unavoidable.During the whole process, He Zhun did not deliberately compete for Jiang Ci's attention. When he was discovered by Jiang Ci entering the church, he was still trying to push Jiang Ci away.
Well, this world is not only about love.
Xiao Huo's salvation was Huo Chao, his tribe, and Jiang Ci, who worked together to break the cage that trapped him.
Jiang Ci's salvation was his deceased parents, He Zhun and Huo Xianfeng. They gave Jiang Ci life, companionship, understanding and love respectively, allowing him to escape from the shadow of his childhood and the dilemma of his omega self-recognition.Come out and find your own path and freedom.
Jiang Ci has a very warm family bond, and Xiao Huo also has a very sincere friendship bond.In addition to their love for each other, they also have other important things.
Xiao Huo also often mentioned Huo Chao, but Jiang Ci did not have a courtship period, but Huo Chao's image was too beautiful, and the powerless He Zhun seemed despicable and unlovable, but what can be done about this, He Zhun alsoI want to have strong combat power, but I also want to be a bug that exists every second.Just kill him and that's it. After all, who likes to endure humiliation and compromise.
The following is a discussion of the necessity of the character He Zhun from the author's perspective and the structure of the full text."It's about the construction of the writing framework and the advancement of plot arrangements. Little angels who are interested can take a look."
This article sets up two major camps of pros and cons, namely the protagonist group and the church.The main plot is that Xiao Huo and Jiang Ci pursue the truth together, fight together, and finally join forces with Pei Changyun and others to overthrow the church.But how to change the map and how to advance the plot line so that the fighting does not seem blunt, then each node needs to be arranged with a driving force and key characters.
This key person needs to contact both camps.That is He Zhun, who can barely be considered a double agent.Because people who had substantial connections with church figures were all dead, such as Huo Chao, Bai Min, Jiang Jinsheng and He Qichu.So He Zhun later took on the role of this connection.
In terms of the role of the plot, He Zhun introduced Jiang Ci to Tiandong Star and facilitated the protagonist CP's encounter.Then he caused the Leinster mission to fail, which indirectly promoted Xiao Huo and A Ci to enter the Holy Dew Planet.And the plot in the trial court leads to the first appearance of Cecilia, an important figure, and the Pope.
Then, because He Zhun installed a signal transmitter on Baize, it promoted the plot of Xiao Huo entering Mingcheng and introducing the Zerg army.Then when Xiao Huo entered the clone body, it was He Zhun who told him Bernard's location, otherwise Xiao Huo would not have been so quick.And Xiao Huo doesn't hate He Zhun, he just rejects Jiang Ci's attention on He Zhun because of the courtship period.Otherwise, he would not trust He Zhun and cooperate with him during church.
As for the later revelation of the stigmata and the identity of the pope, He Zhun will also play a key role.
From He Zhun's perspective, the author can begin to show the situation of the church and the progress of the conspiracy.And the villain can have room to be shaped when he is not fighting with Xiao Huo.The internal structure of the church, the characterization of the main villains, and the secrets of Jiang Ci's life experience are all based on He Zhun's plot.Therefore, this character plays a very important role in the structure of the full text and in promoting the plot.
Apart from the plot, I personally think this is a highlight in terms of character setting and arrangement.
From the main attack perspective, Huo Xianfeng's setting is extremely powerful. He is strong from the beginning, and is the highlight, taking on the main part of the exciting story.As for the other protagonist Jiang Ci, because his setting can only be a growth line, Jiang Ci's character arc appears weak in the early stage, which is also the reason why many little angels said that Jiang Ci's character design is weak.
Ah Ci's positioning has been mentioned before. Here is a little addition. In addition to Huo Xianfeng, he also has a family bond with He Zhun.
Jiang Ci grew up with everyone's love and protection, so even though he had defects and shadows in his childhood, he was still warm and kind.He Zhun grew up in hatred, so he was dark, cunning, despicable and shameless, but his only softness was given to Jiang Ci.
There are two people in the new generation, one is Jiang Ci, the other is He Zhun, one is light, and the other is dark.They grew up together, but took completely different paths.
Jiang Ci's light was not bright enough in the early stage because he needed to grow.There are two turning points in Jiang Ci's growth. One is that after he fell in love with Huo Xianfeng, he grabbed the other person's hand and gradually walked out of the shadow of childhood and the cage of omega self-perception.The second is that he can finally become a mature and powerful guardian on his own. He can protect the powerful Huo Xianfeng and the weak He Zhun.
Light and shadow intersect, and the warm light dispels the darkness, which makes it beautiful.
The above is the starting point for all the plot settings, character creation, and my personal arrangements.You are welcome to discuss the plot, little angels. I will read every one, but please don’t quarrel~
Chapter 126 A big battle
But just when Bai Ze was about to approach, two double-S mechas transformed into snowy lights that lit up at the same time.
Zhou Jiuya instantly recognized that it was Cecilia's Mo Yu, and the other one was Leinster's mecha Prisoner Eagle.
"Cecilia——!!!"
The most hated people in this world last week were the people of the Illusion God Cult, especially Leinster and Cecilia. The former ambushed him, causing him to fail to rescue his brother in time, and later kidnapped Jiang Ci.
As for Cecilia, if she hadn’t been the one to tell the truth, Bai Min wouldn’t have died!Not to mention, this crazy woman cut open Bai Min's stomach and dug out Jiang Ci.
The enemies were extremely jealous when they saw each other, Wan Jiang immediately pounced on Mo Yu, and the two sides fought together.On the other side, Bai Ze and Qiu Ying rushed towards He Zhun's broken life capsule at the same time.
The collision of swords and guns produced dazzling fire.
Leinster clearly noticed the change in Bai Ze from the first moment of the fight, because the silver gun completely changed his style. He made a mistake in his first prediction and was instantly knocked away.
"Varied!"
Leinster's eyes widened, and countless buildings collapsed in an instant. He barely managed to steady his body, and when he looked up, he saw Bai Ze leaning over and grabbing the rescue capsule.At this time, the shell of the rescue capsule had been completely shattered by the energy shock wave just now.
Jiang Ci made a decisive decision and stopped entangled, and quickly controlled the mecha to evacuate.
"Bai Ze opens the landing port! Bring him in!!!"
Wow——
Many mechanical tentacles stretched out from above the cockpit, catching the broken rescue capsule instantly.Bai Ze immediately cleaned up the broken shell of the rescue capsule, and then called up the medical equipment to prepare for rescue, but the next second, the mechanical tentacles stopped.
"Ah Ci, this..."
"What's wrong?!"
Jiang Ci glanced back hastily.But at this glance, he was stunned.
...Stigmata!
He Zhun was actually injected with the stigmata!!!
At this moment, the young man's body was covered in blood, his expression was painful, and there were squirming golden holy marks under his broken clothes, and those things were repairing his wounds.But there was no relevant data in Bai Ze's medical procedures, and he didn't know how to start.
"Cough... cough cough..."
He Zhun slowly sat up from the rescue cabin. During his movements, there was a sound of some kind of bones being reconnected and being straightened.He was in a daze for a few seconds, and his eyes gradually focused on Jiang Ci's face.
"..."
Probably neither of them expected to meet again under such circumstances. As the closest family members, they didn't even know how to speak at this time.
Jiang Ci looked at the young man whose face was covered in blood, with heartache and sadness spreading in his chest.
Now he already knows from his uncle that He Zhun's family was silenced to save him. If it weren't for He Zhun's father, Jiang Ci would have died in the few months after he was born.
He Zhun has been carrying hatred for so many years, and he is one of the reasons why he has reached this point.No wonder this person didn't tell him anything, no wonder He Zhun didn't trust the empire, no wonder he wanted to walk alone.
"He Zhun, are you okay?"
Jiang Ci was the first to break the silence. He wanted to express his concern, and he also wanted to explain to He Zhun immediately about the political cleanup.
"Listen to me, twenty..."
"That's enough Jiang Ci!"
Of course, He Zhun knew that the political cleanup more than 20 years ago was just a show. He knew it from the beginning.But now He Zhun can't let Jiang Ci tell the truth because his body is equipped with a bug.
The Pope spared him his life, but he also spared something else.
He Zhun gestured at his throat,
"Do you think it makes sense to say this hypocritically now?"
"..."
Jiang Ci noticed that special movement and instantly understood what he meant.
It means that what he is saying now is wrong and it is not convenient for him to say it.
Just when Jiang Ci was trying to find a way to further safely communicate with He Zhun, Leinster rushed over like an angry beast.
"Jiang Ci——!!!"
Bai Ze's movements paused for a moment.The recent surge in mental power threshold has raised the empathy between Jiang Ci and Bai Ze to a peak. His current mental power threshold has reached one thousand two, while Leinster is only in his early eight hundred, so even if Bai Ze's mental power threshold just now isThe stiffness did not allow Prison Eagle to find any flaws.
At this time, Bai Ze immediately shot the prisoner's cockpit with a backhand shot.The angle of this shot was so tricky that Leinster was unable to avoid it for a moment in the electric light and flint. He could only cross his swords and barely block this powerful blow.
what happened?!
Who is driving the Baize?!
Leinster's eyes were filled with uncertainty. For a moment, he was not even sure whether Bai Ze's pilot was Jiang Ci, because the opponent's combat effectiveness had made a qualitative leap in half a year, and it was completely different from Zhou Jiuya's before.It is a style of broad opening and closing, but it is cunning and fast, making it impossible to defend against guns.
This familiar feeling reminded Leinster of Huo Chao, no...no, it should be Huo Xiafeng whom he had fought against for the first time.
Leinster, who had lived for more than three hundred years, was very aggrieved, because at this moment, for the first time, he felt like being beaten by a kid in his twenties.
On the other side, when it was confirmed that Jiang Ci was suppressing his opponent and beating him, Huo Xianfeng gave up stepping forward to help. After all, now was the best time to test the results of his teaching.He waved his hand casually, and the next second the entire sky was instantly covered by dense Zerg.
As a king, he generally does not need to take action personally in wars. He needs to control the overall situation.The existence of the forbidden abyss allows this 3S mecha to hover quietly in the air, which is enough deterrence to prevent anyone from rashly launching an attack.
"The Zerg...the Zerg are coming in!!!"
"Defensive barrier...repair the defensive barrier immediately!!!"
"It's too late...the energy can't keep up! The energy can't keep up!"
"..."
The defensive barrier of the military base is not as good as that of Mingcheng, and the self-destruction energy of the aircraft carrier is too great, opening a huge gap. Even if countless personnel in the central control room quickly issued repair orders, the closing speed could not keep up.The Zerg army desperately poured in.
"Quick, quick, quick!!! Order all the fighter planes to rush forward, block the opening, and buy time for the defense barrier to be repaired!!!"
The next second, dozens of fighter jets received the order, turned on their maximum horsepower, and rushed towards the breach one after another.But halfway through, the pilots jumped out of the rescue cabins one after another.
Huo Xianfeng knew what he was doing in this step.Because if missiles or other artillery fire is fired, the hole will only get bigger and bigger, so the only way now is to let the fighter planes rush in, push out some of the incoming Zerg, and then speed up the repair of the barrier.
But he didn't care, and he didn't think this little trick could stop the Zerg invasion.
But obviously the bishop in charge of repairing the defensive barrier in the main control room didn't think so. They watched the invading Zerg being rushed out by a series of fighter planes. However, the fighters that rushed out were eaten up in just ten seconds. It was terrifying.The scene makes any human being unable to help but tremble.
But fortunately, the barrier is about to be repaired.
"Okay...it needs to be repaired!!!"
There was celebration in the control room.
But at this time, Huo Xianfeng looked away from the barrier and let out a sneer.
"Innocent"
At this time, the densely packed Zerg army seemed to have received some order, and moved out of the way neatly like Moses parting the sea. The leader, General Osa, pressed down with his huge body, almost covering most of the sky.
The next second, the newly repaired defensive barrier was now like a thin layer of paper, with a long gap cut open by the sharp blade of the forelimb.
At this moment, all the mechas that were fighting fiercely stopped at the same time, and they all looked up at the same time.
In the endless smoke and artillery fire, I could see the majestic and cold face of Forbidden Abyss looking down from a high position, and it actually seemed a bit cruel at this moment.The light at dusk coated the huge body with a layer of red-golden brilliance.
But soon, the glow of the setting sun behind it was swallowed up by the metal.
At this moment, the colorful world seemed to have been forcibly erased by an invisible hand, leaving only the gray and darkness representing death and fear.
The late guests tore open the defensive barrier in the sky, as if they were sticking their heads out from the abyss at the end of another world. Countless pairs of greedy and violent compound eyes were densely packed all over the sky, and the terrifying mouthparts exhaled cold and gloomy sounds.Breath.
At this moment, not only the church's army, but also the First Legion as an ally felt some extreme terror and fear.It was like being suddenly dragged into a sinking swamp, but struggling to no avail, and could only drown.
At this moment, only Forbidden Abyss could see the King of the Zerg in the cockpit, and saw the stars of pleasure glowing in the depths of his cold and violent vertical pupils.
——He is enjoying this apocalyptic scenery.
Jin Yuan finally understood why Huo Chao arranged countless preparations for Pei Changyun and Huo Xianfeng to stand together.Because if this group of Zerg troops invaded not the Holy Dew Star, but the capital star of the empire.
That is the true end of mankind.
Leinster had almost encountered an unstoppable defeat. He didn't even have time to care about Jiang Ci anymore, because at this moment he was knocked away by a huge monster in an instant.
"Damn-!"
The entire base was in chaos, with gunfire everywhere. The sharp and frightening screams of humans were swallowed up by the even more terrifying screams of the monsters almost as soon as they came out, as if they were as powerless as a drop of water submerged in the sea.
At this moment, fear and shock filled every believer's face, so much so that even their expressions became distorted and gray.Countless buildings collapsed and shattered, like toppled dominoes, and the Zerg army that had absorbed nearly the entire Ming City had regained a new lease of life.
At this moment, Cecilia's expression was almost horrified, and her voice was almost breaking.
"Open the second channel immediately!!!"
Wow——
The space crack that had not been closed just now suddenly enlarged, three times in size.
Countless densely packed mechas poured out of the black cracks.
"That is……!"
Jiang Ci noticed it instantly.
Those mechas are not normal humanoid mechas.Instead, they were the Zerg mechas they had seen on Asparagus before, as well as various weird spliced forms.But there are many, many, and endless streams.
As soon as these mechas came out, they rushed directly towards the Zerg army, and the two sides fought together.
At this time, Bai Ze's electronic sound passed through the biochip and sounded directly in Jiang Ci's mind.
"That's a mecha transformed from the shells of Zerg corpses, a masterpiece of the Saint's chief disciple Angus."
But this was not what Bai Ze said, but what He Zhun said through the connection with Bai Ze.
The Illusion God Religion is in decline.Because after the alliance collapsed, almost 70% of the surviving humans were transferred to Hengyun Star by Pei Changyun.No one can provide a large amount of manpower and material resources to the church.
"Although the Illusion God Cult has technology, it has been worn out over the years and cannot be supplied by large-scale weapon production. Angus proposed that the outer shell of the Zerg can replace the outer mecha. And they also have a way to make the Zerg nerve fluid into energy. In order toIt saves manpower, so it is more like a drone, unified and commanded by the main control system in Angus’ hand.”
The electronic voice speaks very quickly, without a word of nonsense, and quickly outputs information.
"Cecilia also brought Huo Chao's clone and possessed a large number of mental shielding devices. I don't know how Huo Xianfeng is connected with Huo Chao, but it should be Huo Xianfeng's one-way mental power.Establishing a connection similar to that between humans and mechas. Bernard had already noticed this when the Huo Chao Xingbo was exposed."
So He Zhun took the lead and submitted the analysis report to the Pope.
"Jiang Ci, Cecilia is your mother's apostle. She reported it because the Pope already knew about Bai Min's escape. Cecilia could only use this disguise to know their hunting plan, but she doesn't know yet.Her purpose is to continue to stay in the church, so we can only roughly judge that she can become an ally."
"Huo Chao's clone is not just a political tool to fight Pei Changyun. He definitely has other uses, because the stigmata on him are different from everyone else. So it's best to deal with it as soon as possible."
A large amount of information poured into Jiang Ci's mind at once. He quickly analyzed and categorized it, extracted the key points, and then immediately asked Bai Ze to synchronize the information with Zhou Jiuya and Huo Xianfeng.
The next second, Bai Ze flew out and pounced on the nearest Zerg mecha. His silver spear pierced it and instantly nailed it to the wall of the building next to it.
call out!
The next second, the silver ring flew out of Bai Ze's chest, turned into a saber and pierced the brain from the compound eyes. Then countless mechanical tentacles stretched out from the saber, quickly connecting to the invasion.
"Signal decryption in progress..."
"Signal decryption in progress..."
XiaoJiang Ci now needs to find the main control system of Angus.and destroy it immediately.As for the clones of Cecilia and Huo Chao, they can only be left to others.
"Ding"
"Ah Ci! The source of the command signal has been found, underground!!!"
The next second, Jiang Ci directly pulled it to the maximum energy threshold. The silver gun quickly charged up, and the dazzling lightning shot up. The next second, the long gun suddenly came down with thousands of thunders. Under countless artillery fire and mechas,Create a bloody path in the fight.
boom!!!
The ground, which was almost in ruins, suddenly shattered and collapsed with a rumble, revealing the huge underground space below.Jiang Ci stared at it for a few seconds, then asked Xiao X to quickly scan the building structure below and issue commands simultaneously——
"Third echelon, gather close to me immediately! There is an urgent mission."
The Major General's tone was cold and serious,
"The medical team will come immediately to receive the specially wounded and evacuate the battlefield immediately."
Of course Jiang Ci knew He Zhun's purpose and undercover identity, but the church had already installed bugs and injected stigma into him, not to mention that He Zhun had provided so much key information.It was obvious that He Zhun would probably die if he went back.So this time he understood He Zhun, but he didn't intend to put the person back.
So the Major General very coldly added a supplementary order to the medical team,
"Special management is allowed for this injured person in accordance with Article 238 of the regulations. If necessary, compulsory control methods that do not harm personal safety can be adopted."
He Zhun is so smart, he always has various ways to deal with it, so special situations are treated specially.
"Yes, Major General Jiang Ci."
The captain of the medical team quickly confirmed the order and began to prepare a special medical cabin and related instruments.
"etc!!!"
This was He Zhun's voice. It was obvious that he had no idea that Jiang Ci, who had verbally retained him last time they met, would mercilessly detain him this time.
And he had just finished giving so much information. In addition to helping, he also planned to join the war and exchange some other information with the other party. But Jiang Ci threw him away after hearing the information???
This behavior is simply no better than that of a scumbag cat who has deceived all the dried fish and walked away without being touched!!!
"Jiang Ci, you can't..."
He Zhun opened his eyes wide and wanted to say something eagerly, but before he could finish his words, he was directly ejected from the cockpit by Bai Ze and was quickly received by the medical team who rushed over.
The whole process was extremely smooth, and every step was in line with the First Army's standards for treating the wounded on the battlefield.If it could be recorded, it could be used as a teaching model in military academies.
After confirming that the medical team began to withdraw from the battlefield, Jiang Ci's eyes returned to the collapsed underground entrance.
"Ah Ci! The scanning of the building structure has been completed and the 3D model map is being created. It will take one minute."
LittleAfter getting the map, Bai Ze immediately jumped down and turned into a meteor that instantly sank into the underground entrance.At the same time, dozens of A-level military mechas escaped from the battle without hesitation and quickly followed Bai Ze into the ground.
At the same time, Jin Yuan and Wan Jiang simultaneously received the message from Bai Ze.
Huo Xianfeng knew that Jiang Ci had gone to find Angus's main control system. Although he had full trust in Jiang Ci's current combat effectiveness, he thought about it and sent a Zerg scout unit to follow him.
As for himself.
Huo Xianfeng turned his head and looked into the distance behind him.
A double-S mecha that looked like a forbidden abyss was flying towards him quickly.
The driver inside is Huo Chao's clone.
It has to be said that everything this church does falls into the minefield that Wang can’t stand the most.If he could barely hold back his anger when he saw a large number of mechas made from Zerg corpses just now, then at this moment, he felt that there was no need to suppress it.
The golden vertical pupils that had always been cold now seemed to be filled with flowing molten lava. Because of the extreme murderous intent and anger, they even had a dazzling red gold feel, so hot that it seemed to burn everything.
boom!
The next second, the two sides instantly fought together.
The two similar halberds collided and produced countless dazzling sparks, making bursts of loud noises no less than the exploding cannonballs.
The originally chaotic battlefield was completely cleared up, because no other mecha warship could maintain stable flight and combat amid such violent airflow and energy impact.They were like ships on a stormy sea, completely thrown away.
Countless imperial soldiers and believers were hit on the ground by the aftermath, but they had no intention of continuing to fight at this moment and could only stare up at this magnificent spectacle with their mouths open.
The two super-giant mechas, which are rare in the world, are like gods and demons fighting in the apocalypse. They collide and impact. The energy aftermath of each confrontation impacts the surroundings. Strong pressure radiates from the center of the battle group to the entire space, bursting out countless waves.The intertwined arc-shaped lightning flashed indescribably magnificent colors in the dim sky.
"Two...Two Forbidden Abyss?!"
"No, the one I was pressed against is obviously a fake. It just looks similar."
Zhou Jiuya's voice appeared in the public communication channel of the First Legion.
"Everyone withdraws from the fighting area, reorganizes the formation, and continues fighting."
"yes!"
Zhou Jiuya turned off the communication channel and looked at the two mechas in the distance. It was obvious that even if the other Forbidden Abyss was a fake, its external machine was built according to the 3S mecha, otherwise it would not be able to withstand it.The current confrontation.
It seems that the Huan Shen Cult has spent a lot of money this time, but even so, how can a fake defeat Huo Xianfeng?
Zhou Jiuya also received the news from Bai Ze, and he also had the same questions as He Zhun. It was obviously a given failure, why did the other party have to put in so much effort?
But now none of them could find the answer. After more than half an hour, the furious Huo Xianfeng finally suppressed the opponent completely. The halberd directly broke through the energy defense cover, pierced the cockpit door, and then made a loud bang.Immediately nailed the mecha to the ground.
Buzz——
The scarlet electronic sound flickered twice, and finally faded into darkness.
"Huo Xianfeng! I have taken care of... Angus' main control system. I will be back soon. How is the situation over there?"
Jiang Ci's breathing was a little breathless, as if he had just gone through a fierce battle.Huo Xianfeng sent a Zerg scout to follow him. Naturally, he knew the whole situation. He raised his head and glanced, and sure enough, he found that the Zerg mechas that had been attacking frantically began to stagger, and seemed to be in chaos.
Tsk, he is indeed Major General Jiang Ci.
As expected of his wife.
Huo Xianfeng's sullen mood finally improved a little. He thought about it and then gave a compliment,
"Aci baby, you are so amazing."
"...?"
Why did this guy suddenly have a fit???
But Jiang Ci suddenly remembered, oh, by the way, Huo Xianfeng is still in the courtship period.So he pursed his lips and decided to appease his boyfriend who wanted to pay attention during the courtship period, so he also replied,
"Brother Xiao Huo, you are also very strong. You are really handsome today."
"!!!"
The corners of Huo Xianfeng's mouth curled up, feeling comfortable.
At this moment, Zhou Jiuya's voice came faintly from the public communication channel——
"cough."
He didn't say anything, just coughed slightly.
But the implication is very, very clear. The battle is not over yet. What are you two showing on the public channel?!!!
Although it was just a slight cough, Jiang Ci instantly recognized the voice of his little uncle.
Bai Ze reminded in a low voice,
"Ah Ci, the big devil just opened the public communication."
Jiang Ci: "..."
Huo Xianfeng——!!!
This guy did it on purpose!
The author has something to say:
ps: I won’t write such a long explanation later, feel free to read it.
My personal writing level is really limited. This is only my second Danmei. The plot is not well controlled, and there are problems with character creation. There are indeed many flaws. I didn’t say that I think my writing is perfect in every aspect. It’s just me.The level is like this. I tried my best and put the most thought into it. My hand speed is slow. In order to maintain such a large amount of updates, I basically spend more than ten hours a day coding (no exaggeration).
So this article can really only be written like this. My writing habits and style are like this. I have been working hard to improve them, but they still have not met the expectations of some readers. It is because of my lack of ability and my low writing level. I am sorry..
The copywriting has also been written. You are welcome to discuss the plot, but I decline writing guidance because it is difficult for everyone to agree. Thank you for your understanding.
What follows is my personal understanding and interpretation of the characters, which are really very personal. Everyone agrees without bowing their heads. You don’t have to read it, you don’t have to agree. It’s up to you whether you like the character or not, or even like this article.
(Originally, I wanted to delete all my subsequent comments, but I thought some readers might say that I had a guilty conscience, so I’ll leave them here. I sent out red envelopes to appease the comment section, and I selected a two-point rating in batches. It wasn’t just a comment.Choose those who speak to me.)
What follows is the previous explanation.
“If you don’t want to see it, you can skip it.”
"It's really long. I don't recommend reading it. You can skip it."
He Zhun's father helped save Jiang Ci, who was infected by the stigma, but his whole family was silenced as a result.
It is not an exaggeration to say that He Zhun's family died for Jiang Ci.
He Zhun is the only survivor and knows the truth.So at first he resented why Jiang Jinsheng came to their home, but later because of Jiang Jinsheng's company and love, he understood and liked this gentle Uncle Jiang. Because he was used to being an older brother, he also liked Jiang Ci very much.good.But these cannot stop He Zhun's revenge.
It is true that he has been unscrupulous, even cunning and despicable, but this is because he has no choice.He is a beta, he does not have the perverted fighting power of Xiaofeng, nor does he meet Huo Chao to escort him like Pei Changyun.And all He Zhun has is himself.His own body, this body includes "sex" and "mind".
He trembled in the church and climbed up at all costs. The purpose was to find his enemy. At the same time, he also wanted to find out what the stigmata was.His father and Uncle Jiang had been tortured by the stigmata for hundreds of years, and he wanted to find a way to escape. This was why He Zhun stayed in the Huan Shen Cult.
The above is the premise.
Then here are some answers to the questions raised by little angels in the comment area.
1. Regarding He Zhun’s suspicion of moral kidnapping.
Answer: Not really.He didn't grab Jiang Ci, he grabbed Pei Changyun's group and said, my family is kind to you, so you must repay me, you must accommodate me, and you must save me.He has always been on his way to revenge alone, and has never asked for help or understanding from anyone in the protagonist group.
2. Jiang Ci OOC before the revision of the previous chapter.
Answer: Before the revision, Jiang Ci ignored Xiao Huo and went directly to rescue He Zhun.After the revision, Jiang Ci responded by asking Xiao Huo to wait, and added two sentences to emphasize that He Zhun was about to die.In fact, before the revision, I personally felt that Jiang Ci did not have OOC, because in an emergency, it was normal for him to have no time to reply to Xiao Huo. He rushed to save people.
On one side was the brother who was about to crash in the rescue cabin, and on the other was the boyfriend who ran over to beg for praise. It was normal for the latter to immediately save He Zhun before he could respond.Moreover, the relationship between Ah Ci and Xiao Feng is close enough. It is like a young couple who has just started dating. They are always worrying about gains and losses, but a couple who loves and confirms each other deeply will not.In an emergency, Ah Ci had no time to respond, which would not have any impact on their relationship.It’s just that a lot of people in the comment area were scolding me, so I had to make some modifications.
3. He Zhunjiangzhi always relies on others to save him.
Answer: There is no wisdom, but he has indeed been a little anxious recently, because this character is not perfect. He is only five years older than Jiang Ci. It took him thirteen years to climb up to a Leinster and get close to Cecilia.Failure is normal.It's normal that he can't deal with the Pope.Otherwise, He Zhun would bring the entire Huan Shen Cult into a tailspin, and the tragic experiences of Huo Chao, Xiao Huo, and so many others because of the church would be a joke.
The current situation is that He Zhun guessed that Huo Chao would be the final killer move of the Huan Shen Cult, not just against Pei Changyun.Therefore, he must enter the most core place to get information.The secret of Shuanghuo's connection was exposed before because Xiaofeng had already exposed it himself.After the Xingbo came out, it was only a matter of time for the Huan Shen Cult to find out the connection between them.It's better to become a bargaining chip for He Zhun to take a step forward.
But He Zhun didn't always let others save him. In the first trial, he relied on himself. In the second time in the main hall, he was indeed saved by Leinster, but it was he who allowed Leinster to save him.Thirteen years of hard work and preparation. As for whether it counts as PUA, he has never suppressed Leinster, and he almost died at the hands of Leinster in the early stage. The relationship between the two of them is very complicated. In short, one is willing to fight and the other is willing to suffer.The third time the rescue capsule crashed, he was unlucky and happened to hit Xiao Huo's attack.
4. The bond between Jiang Ci and He Zhun is too deep, and it feels like they have surpassed Xiao Huo.
The answer is that their bond is indeed deep, but it does not transcend.Because Jiang Ci and He Zhun were family members who grew up together. When Jiang Ci was kidnapped, it was He Zhun who found and rescued him. When Jiang Ci was questioned by the whole world, before Huo Xianfeng showed up,, it was He Zhun who always accompanied, encouraged and supported him.
As for injections of rhodin, it is harmless.It's because only something as serious as Zhi Meihua can be used as an excuse to lure Jiang Ci to Tiandong Star.And He Zhun knew that with Ye Shu around, nothing would happen to Jiang Ci.As for Jiang Ci entering the auction house and being injured and attracting many alphas, he disguised himself and went in. He Zhun did not expect this.
And now Jiang Ci knows that He Zhun's family was brutally murdered to save him.Therefore, it is very, very normal for Jiang Ci to care about He Zhun.If he didn't care, he would be cold-blooded and look like a wolf.As for Jiang Ci, he cared more about He Zhun than Xiao Huo.Not at all, because the powerful Huo Xianfeng is safely beside Jiang Ci, while the weak He Zhun is in the den of tigers and wolves. In the last chapter, he fell to death immediately.
The elder brother is about to fall to death, and the younger brother still wants to kiss and show affection to his boyfriend?So strange, right?
Why should a family member or a lover be compared on the same scale?As for Xiao Huo being jealous, he was in the courtship period. Anyone in the world would be jealous of anyone who captured his wife's attention, even if it was a dog.It's just that at this special time, Jiang Ci was very worried about He Zhun's life safety, so part of his attention would naturally be focused on He Zhun, making Xiao Huo jealous which was unavoidable.During the whole process, He Zhun did not deliberately compete for Jiang Ci's attention. When he was discovered by Jiang Ci entering the church, he was still trying to push Jiang Ci away.
Well, this world is not only about love.
Xiao Huo's salvation was Huo Chao, his tribe, and Jiang Ci, who worked together to break the cage that trapped him.
Jiang Ci's salvation was his deceased parents, He Zhun and Huo Xianfeng. They gave Jiang Ci life, companionship, understanding and love respectively, allowing him to escape from the shadow of his childhood and the dilemma of his omega self-recognition.Come out and find your own path and freedom.
Jiang Ci has a very warm family bond, and Xiao Huo also has a very sincere friendship bond.In addition to their love for each other, they also have other important things.
Xiao Huo also often mentioned Huo Chao, but Jiang Ci did not have a courtship period, but Huo Chao's image was too beautiful, and the powerless He Zhun seemed despicable and unlovable, but what can be done about this, He Zhun alsoI want to have strong combat power, but I also want to be a bug that exists every second.Just kill him and that's it. After all, who likes to endure humiliation and compromise.
The following is a discussion of the necessity of the character He Zhun from the author's perspective and the structure of the full text."It's about the construction of the writing framework and the advancement of plot arrangements. Little angels who are interested can take a look."
This article sets up two major camps of pros and cons, namely the protagonist group and the church.The main plot is that Xiao Huo and Jiang Ci pursue the truth together, fight together, and finally join forces with Pei Changyun and others to overthrow the church.But how to change the map and how to advance the plot line so that the fighting does not seem blunt, then each node needs to be arranged with a driving force and key characters.
This key person needs to contact both camps.That is He Zhun, who can barely be considered a double agent.Because people who had substantial connections with church figures were all dead, such as Huo Chao, Bai Min, Jiang Jinsheng and He Qichu.So He Zhun later took on the role of this connection.
In terms of the role of the plot, He Zhun introduced Jiang Ci to Tiandong Star and facilitated the protagonist CP's encounter.Then he caused the Leinster mission to fail, which indirectly promoted Xiao Huo and A Ci to enter the Holy Dew Planet.And the plot in the trial court leads to the first appearance of Cecilia, an important figure, and the Pope.
Then, because He Zhun installed a signal transmitter on Baize, it promoted the plot of Xiao Huo entering Mingcheng and introducing the Zerg army.Then when Xiao Huo entered the clone body, it was He Zhun who told him Bernard's location, otherwise Xiao Huo would not have been so quick.And Xiao Huo doesn't hate He Zhun, he just rejects Jiang Ci's attention on He Zhun because of the courtship period.Otherwise, he would not trust He Zhun and cooperate with him during church.
As for the later revelation of the stigmata and the identity of the pope, He Zhun will also play a key role.
From He Zhun's perspective, the author can begin to show the situation of the church and the progress of the conspiracy.And the villain can have room to be shaped when he is not fighting with Xiao Huo.The internal structure of the church, the characterization of the main villains, and the secrets of Jiang Ci's life experience are all based on He Zhun's plot.Therefore, this character plays a very important role in the structure of the full text and in promoting the plot.
Apart from the plot, I personally think this is a highlight in terms of character setting and arrangement.
From the main attack perspective, Huo Xianfeng's setting is extremely powerful. He is strong from the beginning, and is the highlight, taking on the main part of the exciting story.As for the other protagonist Jiang Ci, because his setting can only be a growth line, Jiang Ci's character arc appears weak in the early stage, which is also the reason why many little angels said that Jiang Ci's character design is weak.
Ah Ci's positioning has been mentioned before. Here is a little addition. In addition to Huo Xianfeng, he also has a family bond with He Zhun.
Jiang Ci grew up with everyone's love and protection, so even though he had defects and shadows in his childhood, he was still warm and kind.He Zhun grew up in hatred, so he was dark, cunning, despicable and shameless, but his only softness was given to Jiang Ci.
There are two people in the new generation, one is Jiang Ci, the other is He Zhun, one is light, and the other is dark.They grew up together, but took completely different paths.
Jiang Ci's light was not bright enough in the early stage because he needed to grow.There are two turning points in Jiang Ci's growth. One is that after he fell in love with Huo Xianfeng, he grabbed the other person's hand and gradually walked out of the shadow of childhood and the cage of omega self-perception.The second is that he can finally become a mature and powerful guardian on his own. He can protect the powerful Huo Xianfeng and the weak He Zhun.
Light and shadow intersect, and the warm light dispels the darkness, which makes it beautiful.
The above is the starting point for all the plot settings, character creation, and my personal arrangements.You are welcome to discuss the plot, little angels. I will read every one, but please don’t quarrel~
